Thursday, September 24, 2009

Shiny Tin Boxes






I say I never meant to hide it from you, but we both know better
Boxed up babies and
Chronological change purses
shiny tin boxes, alphabetized,
Alkali bunnies, corroding dust
Empty fucks gone habitually, inappropriately
jawdroppingly knowable,
last minute nicknames
offered as payment for
quiet rapacious shower tableaus, but
Unraveling Winnie-the-Pooh verses
Won’t explain you
ziplining a pistol

Ave Maria came over the hill, and I
Tucked under the window pane
wanted to give it all to you
sensible. Never strange. Never
reeking of molecules that failed to rise
and evaporate into a fresh morning

shiny tin boxes left to rust
concealing decades of lost Scrabble games
Perfumed talc dusted hip bones,
Toothless nights spent whistling the
Idiot’s Guide to the String Theory
Dog-earing Robert Burns on
Sexual Healing, Doing
Odometer reads while gunning
the engine, bargaining the yard chickens
to coo a little longer


A poem for Read Write Poem, which I haven't contributed to in so very long. I tried to follow the prompt, but it went awry somewhere. I'm posting this anyway because they keep telling us we don't have to follow the rules. Had to use some trickery (i.e. challenge games) to pull this one out of me. See if you can spot the two I used.

6 comments:

Paul Oakley said...

I like this poem.

"shiny tin boxes left to rust
concealing decades of ...
"

I like that you made the boxes both shiny and prone to rust. Such is life.
_____

Paul Oakley
Blogging his ReadWritePoem poems at
Inner Light, Radiant Life

bearlyaudible said...

Adorable, would that be a word? Provocative on tiny little feet, your phrasing has many treats. Thanks.

Wayne Pitchko said...

what a treat to read.....nicely done and thanks for sharing....hope to see you here more often...

Tumblewords: said...

This reeks of reality, in a good way! Idiot's Guide to String Theory - a worthy read! Fun stuff.

Nubia said...

I like the leaps in ideas this piece takes. And "Toothless nights spent whistling" is a great line.

Deb said...

(You don't have to follow rules! Yes, it's true!)

I'm mesmerized by the narrator's conversations and recollections -- for me it alternates between family (perhaps mother) and lovers (or less loving encounters).

I especially loved the last stanza, every single line.

I'm not sure which games you used (other than strip-Scrabble?!? and I am not familiar with Pooh games), but the photo is fascinating, too.